The feild trip

  1. Developed by: Tori:-)

This girl, ME, goes on a field trip. Unfortunately, I'm paired up with the school bully! Will I live?

ps. I got a 4 on this story @ school.

                                           

Chapter 1 of 1

Chapter 1: *FICTION*



Once, my teacher said, "Class! We're going on a field trip!" I was paired up with a bully.

When I got there, I felt the warm sand between my toes. I heard the other kids shouting. Suddenly, Emma, the bully pushed me into the water. I tried to swim, but I couldn't. Finally, I got out. Emma said she was sorry and told me why she was a bully. On the bus back to school, some kids were teasing Emma. I shouted,"She can't help it!" The bus driver stopped. I went on and on about how she wasn't trying to be mean. Afterward, we all decided to be friends.

THE END!

PS: this is a short version of my A+ story, the original was 5 pages!


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