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Warrior Cats Fanfic: Loner`s Quest (Part 1)

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3 Chapter - 272 Words - Developed by: Crispykitty - Updated on: 2015-11-23 - Developed on: - 750 taken- The story is currently being written

HI! THIS IS MY FIRST EVER FANFIC AND IT IS MY BEST EFFORT! I HOPE TO PRODUCE EVEN BETTER FANFICTION IN THE FUTURE! UNTIL THEN, PLEASE ENJOY THIS!

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The loner stalked through the tall grass. She was downwind of the rabbit. Her ears pricked, she charged straight at it and chased it over a ridge. The rabbit darted into a clump of heather. She caught it, then stopped to look around. She was on Clan territory!

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Emma (28743)
353 days ago
The chapters need to be a lot longer. I recomend you make like fifty chapters if their going to be that short. But it's really good otherwise.