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Miraculous Fan-fiction: The Sting of the Bee

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    It was a wonderful day and Paris looked beautiful in the long-lasting sunlight, the sky was a dazzling blue, and not a cloud could be seen. However, M
    It was a wonderful day and Paris looked beautiful in the long-lasting sunlight, the sky was a dazzling blue, and not a cloud could be seen. However, Marinette was paying no attention to the blue sky and ferocious heat nor the fact that she could view this spectacular scene from the roof-tops of Paris as her alter ego Ladybug. All she could think about were the stinging words Chloe Bourgeois had shouted at her earlier that day in school. So far Marinette had been able to put these thoughts at the back of her head to focus on lessons but now that there was nothing to distract her and school was over, it was all she could think about. “Calm down Marinette nobody can control what Chloe says except herself, besides it’s not as if you are her only target, and imagine what Chloe would think if she knew you were Ladybug.” Tikki’s words only cheered Marinette up slightly but she still returned the encouraging smile Tikki gave her. “I know but I’m so angry Tikki and Chloe is just a stuck-up brat who cares about no one but herself!” Giving up, Tikki sighed, there was no point in trying to calm Marinette down as it was more than likely going to make her even angrier, and then she would be akumatized! That would surely be the last thing anybody would want.

    The Next Day

    Marinette went to the school the next day only to go home angrier than she had ever been before, including the time Lila had got her expelled. Chloe had done something horrible even for her and Marinette was almost considering being home-schooled until Adrien flashed into her mind. If Adrien was at school no way was home-schooling an option, but it could remain a possibility…
    Alya and Nino were chatting just outside the school when they saw the Akuma, at first it seemed as though it was heading for Adrien and Nino shouted out in warning. Now everyone was aware of it. The Akuma disappeared around the corner where Marinette was standing, upset and angry. It was only Alya who heard the familiar sound of her best friend’s voice speaking the two words that so many Parisians had spoken before her: “Yes, Hawkmoth.”
    She told everyone who could hear her run but Chloe was not running to safety she was running to the one place the villain would look for her first. Her Queen Bee signal. Alya got her phone out ready to film the villain fight (For Ladyblog reasons of course.) Cat Noir arrived on the scene and warned her to stay out of danger, but there was no sign of Ladybug. She had never been this late for a fight before, not ever. Had something happened to Paris’s beloved heroine or was Ladybug… no Alya couldn’t believe what she was thinking it was surely illogical, but if it was true, if there was any possibility of it being true, Cat Noir would definitely be taking on this villain alone. This was bad.

Comments (12)


82 days ago
Hey just wanna let u guys know I will be discontinuing this fanfic I honestly wouldn't have made a second part if it wasn't for ur support but I have moved away from miraculous and everything but I have recently got rlly into the harry potter fandom so I will be on wattpad, m.fanfiction.net and quite possibly still on here on a new account: Bonnie Lestrange.
Sorry If I disappointed anybody and I'm pretty sure nobody will read this as I haven't updated for months but If anyone out there is still checking for updates I wanna say tysm even if my writing does kinda suck

Again sorry to disappoint but I was probably never gonna post a new chapter

Bye for now, I might be back one day until then
Miraculous wishes
171 days ago
If you have read every chapter of this fanfiction and hopefully enjoyed then you will be pleased to know that I am holding a competition!
Instead of writing it myself I want you guys to come up with chapter six and my favourite one will be used in the story
The deadline is March 31st
Please send the chapters in the comments
If you would like your name featured or a username please tell me what that would be
This chapter may not come out until July at the latest so I have time to read all the chapters...
There is no word limit
But no rude or unkind words
And have fun!

Miraculous wishes

201 days ago
Omg I love this story, I have so many questions:
Will Marinette be akumatized again, or will she be akumatized as Ladybug?
Will Cat Blanc show up?
And will chloe have the guts to say sorry?
Also in the next chapter I hope LB can like backchat Hawkie or something, that would be purr-fect.
208 days ago
Thank you melonseed54 for the suggestion but at the moment I have already started writing part 6...my main goal is to get to at least 10 parts and it wouldn't have been possible for me to even get this far without all of your wonderful comments they really make my day... I hope to start posting chapters at least once a dl fortnight but no promises... I am also creating a new account and I am currently working on reposting the chapters there... The account will be called MiraBug and I will also be working with another MLB fan called MiraQueen so be sure to check out her work too

Have a miraculous day
214 days ago
This is so good!
Much better than any of mine!
I can't wait for part 8!
If you need any help just let me know ☺️
Melony day!
246 days ago
Hi I know I haven't posted in a while but I have the worst case of writers block... Can I have some suggestions for Part 5 please and sorry for a long wait

278 days ago
Can't wait too @melonseed54! Please do part five!
291 days ago
Please do part five soon! Cant wait!
297 days ago
Loving this story!!!
302 days ago
That is true but without marinette having her miraculous the story wouldn't work!

Thanks for your comment!
305 days ago
Can't wait for the next part!!!!
305 days ago
If an akuma got into Maranette, then her earings would be taken from her to give to hawkmoth.

Sorry for my bad spelling