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The Sting of the Bee part 5

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Are you excited? Because I know I am. This ends in a slight cliffhanger but all will be revealed in the next part...

"Why are you here?" Ladybug questioned in a threatening tone.
"I just want to talk." Replied Hawkmoth
"Me? Talk? To you? Yeah right. Try and make me."
"Oh we will…" answered Mayura as she appeared behind Ladybug. The heroine reached for her yoyo but it wasn't there. "Looking for something?" Mayura asked, holding up the red and black yoyo. Are you kidding me? LB thought before recovering from her shock. "How did you... Ugh never mind. You better give it back!" she shouted "Why should I?" Mayura questioned. Suddenly LB's bug phone rang. It was cat noir. Mayura threw her yoyo as far away as she could before turning back to Ladybug "If you want it you better go and get it…" She was about to jump down from the rooftop when something, well someone, grabbed her wrist. "Oh Ladybug. Did you think we'd let you go? Now, as I said earlier, we just want to talk." Ladybug glared at hawkmoth for a moment before giving in, "fine, what is it?"

Comments (12)


36 days ago
Hey just wanna let u guys know I will be discontinuing this fanfic I honestly wouldn't have made a second part if it wasn't for ur support but I have moved away from miraculous and everything but I have recently got rlly into the harry potter fandom so I will be on wattpad, m.fanfiction.net and quite possibly still on here on a new account: Bonnie Lestrange.
Sorry If I disappointed anybody and I'm pretty sure nobody will read this as I haven't updated for months but If anyone out there is still checking for updates I wanna say tysm even if my writing does kinda suck

Again sorry to disappoint but I was probably never gonna post a new chapter

Bye for now, I might be back one day until then
Miraculous wishes
125 days ago
If you have read every chapter of this fanfiction and hopefully enjoyed then you will be pleased to know that I am holding a competition!
Instead of writing it myself I want you guys to come up with chapter six and my favourite one will be used in the story
The deadline is March 31st
Please send the chapters in the comments
If you would like your name featured or a username please tell me what that would be
This chapter may not come out until July at the latest so I have time to read all the chapters...
There is no word limit
But no rude or unkind words
And have fun!

Miraculous wishes

156 days ago
Omg I love this story, I have so many questions:
Will Marinette be akumatized again, or will she be akumatized as Ladybug?
Will Cat Blanc show up?
And will chloe have the guts to say sorry?
Also in the next chapter I hope LB can like backchat Hawkie or something, that would be purr-fect.
163 days ago
Thank you melonseed54 for the suggestion but at the moment I have already started writing part 6...my main goal is to get to at least 10 parts and it wouldn't have been possible for me to even get this far without all of your wonderful comments they really make my day... I hope to start posting chapters at least once a dl fortnight but no promises... I am also creating a new account and I am currently working on reposting the chapters there... The account will be called MiraBug and I will also be working with another MLB fan called MiraQueen so be sure to check out her work too

Have a miraculous day
169 days ago
This is so good!
Much better than any of mine!
I can't wait for part 8!
If you need any help just let me know ☺️
Melony day!
201 days ago
Hi I know I haven't posted in a while but I have the worst case of writers block... Can I have some suggestions for Part 5 please and sorry for a long wait

233 days ago
Can't wait too @melonseed54! Please do part five!
245 days ago
Please do part five soon! Cant wait!
251 days ago
Loving this story!!!
256 days ago
That is true but without marinette having her miraculous the story wouldn't work!

Thanks for your comment!
259 days ago
Can't wait for the next part!!!!
259 days ago
If an akuma got into Maranette, then her earings would be taken from her to give to hawkmoth.

Sorry for my bad spelling