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My day at the NEW Freddy Fazbear's

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    A while back my mom took me to Freddy Fazbear's pizzaria for my 8th birthday. I was so excited 'cause all of my friends go there, but I can't say that it was enjoyable. All the robots were cute and had rosy cheecks! Then, I had to go to the bathrooms, oh the bathrooms.

    2
    I walked in as if nothing was going to happen except for my whiz going into the toilet. As I walked out I heard a screach to my right, followed by a load *splish*... ...*K-thunk*. At that point I was scared out of my pants. The room all that happened in was called "Parts and Service, so Being a Human and all I checked it out.

    3
    At this point a kid my age would turn around but no, I wasn't that kid. Inside the first thing I saw was freddy from the old place. He looked torn up and, betrayed! All I noticed was Chica was missing. I looked everywhere in the room for Chica! She wasn't there!

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    Now I find my self inside the Parts room. In a corner. Alone. Oh yes I was alone. As soon as I turn my back they're all gone! All of them! Where
    Now I find my self inside the Parts room. In a corner. Alone. Oh yes I was alone. As soon as I turn my back they're all gone! All of them! Where did they go! I walked out only to find the new Chica staring at one of the security cameras. I crept into the bathroom to stay out of her vision. I didn't believe it but, I was trapped there AT NIGHT!

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    I walked out to check for Chica and saw that the coast was clear. I sprinted to the door like a crazy-freak. Just then I stop at the door and look up.
    I walked out to check for Chica and saw that the coast was clear. I sprinted to the door like a crazy-freak. Just then I stop at the door and look up. There, Dangling from the ceiling, was the new foxy! Before I had a second to run it was almost too late. I skid to the side but fall over in a pool of blood left behind by something. Now I had a bad pain in my back but was able to get through the door and out of that damned place once and for all!

Comments (4)

autorenew

299 days ago
loved the sound effects!
299 days ago
This was an amazing story! You are an awesome writer. I felt really immersed.
340 days ago
Creepy
Not really
Is that even true?
501 days ago
Wow that was real cool man but I'm on my mom's phone so I need to leve now sorry so short byeeee!