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In The Dark

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Here’s a short story a wrote. It’s all little sad, but enjoy! Share this with your friends to get it around! Can’t wait for you guys to read it!

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    ...In The Dark... The words that came out of her mouth stung like poison from a needle. I couldn’t believe what I had heard. “Sorry...” she said
    ...In The Dark...

    The words that came out of her mouth stung like poison from a needle. I couldn’t believe what I had heard. “Sorry...” she said, as she delivered the news. The painful words traveled from her mouth to my ears. The word sorry had said enough, I didn’t need anymore words to know. I closed my eyes remembered all the times we had together, the stories he would tell me before I drifted off to sleep, the way he’d hold me close when we embraced, and all the places he would take me and my siblings. My mother continued, “Grandpa....” She couldn’t finish. I looked at my younger siblings and their teary faces. I couldn’t cry in front of them, I had to stay strong. As we were leaving the hospital, things started to calm down. We had been there all day, and it was dark out. I’m glad it was dark during the car ride, so that no one could see the tear trailing down my cheek.

Comments (11)

autorenew

616 days ago
Mysterious and well written
697 days ago
This was beautiful and amazing
717 days ago
I have a little question, how does this fit under horror? Bisides that love it!
770 days ago
Short but good. Part 2?
798 days ago
Interesting! It is short but has good potential. I think I get it, so the grampa died??
890 days ago
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
933 days ago
I really like this! Great job!
1034 days ago
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1057 days ago
People need to comment bc show her credit and give her some!
1072 days ago
Cute story. Talented writer!
1088 days ago
😥 good but made me cry