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Dear Diary #1: The Little Girl Group

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I first wrote this in my Tablo account:
https://tablo.io/alessa-1/zoe
Zoe Florence Laine goes to a new school. She has a new crush, new friends and a new MEAN girl, Jacklin J. Raible Models. It seems that the new mean girl is crushing on the SAME boy she is crushing! And plus, a dance is coming up, will her crush ask her out? Read the book to find out!

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((big)) Chapter 1 ((ebig)) September 4th Today was the first day of school. I was very excited. I just moved to Los Angeles, California. My name is Zo
Chapter 1
September 4th
Today was the first day of school. I was very excited. I just moved to Los Angeles, California. My name is Zoe Florence Laine. I am the new student btw ( btw: by the way ). I got into a new school. I am thirteen.
I am so excited to meet new friends. I have short curly not-so dark brown hair, brown eyes and light skin. So when Mom took me to school, it had a black sign saying: ‘ White Middle School ’ and I was SO excited...
More than so excited. I knew that I was going to meet new friends.
Well, last year in my old school, I was the only one that didn’t have a CCP ( Cool, Cute & Popular ) group. I was normal. Every girl had one. Since my bff Lana decided to not be my friend anymore just because of her stupid little group, I was lonely. You must be thinking Come on, get a new friend, don't be shy but it was a hard decision to get a new friend. Lana was the nicest girl I knew in my old school and even worse, all my friends were in her side. I mean, I told my parents, Jacklin Laine and John Florence. They told me to just go get a new friend but it wasn’t easy: Lana was worshipped by EVERYONE and also admired by EVERYONE.
So the fourth time I told them that I didn’t want to be in my old school anymore because it was a HORROR to be in there, they decided to make me go to a new school. Finally! I am FREE from the TERRIBLE days that I had to be in there. So when I got in there, it was full of kids chatting with these people and around these big awesome red lockers.
I was with my backpack and I walked. I saw a sign saying:

Principal's Office

I got in there. There was a man with brown hair, brown eyes and not so light skin. “ Well hi Ms. Florence. Welcome to our school, White Middle School. I would like you to fill this in.... ” he gave me a paper. I filled it in...

Welcome to White Middle School

Name: * Zoe Florence Laine *
Parents: * John Florence & Jacklin Laine *
Siblings: * Stacey Florence Laine *
Welcome to White Middle School! We are so happy to have you! So you know, we are also White Elementary School but we are in another building and also we have White High School!
For you to know, we also have a lot of rules...
1. Never call your teacher by her/his last name, if you do it, you get a suspension for one day ( it is disrespect for us and also, the teachers are used to be called without their last name ).
2. Always call the teachers Mr. or Ms. (you are allowed to for example, say your teacher is called Wendy, you must call your teacher Ms. Wendy ).
3. Never violate. If there is any violation done here, you get suspended for a few days.
4. Never bring fidgets to our school. If any student is seen having a fidget on their hands, they will be suspended.
5. Do not bring peanuts. 80% of our school is allergic to peanuts.
Never bring peanuts or anything that a classmate or teacher is allergic to. If you do, you will be suspended for two days.
6. Never disrupt. If any disruption occurs, your teacher will send you to Mr. Hengon's office.

Any allergies? Write them down...
* Dogs.
I agree to follow the rules and if I break them, I accept suspensions.

Sincerely,
Zoe Florence Laine *


*: stuff I wrote
I gave it to him “Thank you, Zoe. So my name is Austin Hengon. But please call me Mr. Hengon. So Zoe, have any questions? ” he asked
“Um, do we have any language classes? ” I asked “ Yes, we have French Classes. So did you bring your materials? ” the question about if I brought my materials was obvious that I DID bring my materials.
“ Yes... nine lined notebooks, one graphed notebook, one blue erasable pen and one red earsable pen. ” I said. “Perfect. So you’re in... ” he said with a notebook that had some stuff written “ Ms. Janette’s class, eight grade. So there will um, do you want me to come with you or.... well, better I'll just give you the map and draw an x where you’re class is. ”
Wow, Mr. Hengon you're so lazy I thought but I should not judge him, maybe he needs to do work. He got a paper of the map of this school.
He drew an x and gave it to me “Thank you. ” I said “ You’re
welcome. ” he told me. I grabbed it and left. I looked at the map
“ Okay.... Ms. Jannette’s class... ” I said looking at the paper and walking. People turned around and looked at me like if I was famous or something. Some girls whispered stuff about me... I could hear:
“ Who’s that? ” “ What one the world.... Hayley, do you know who she is? I never seen her. ” “ Zach, do you think that she’s a new student? ”
I just nervously looked at them and looked around. I looked at the map. I passed four rooms. Ms. Jannette’s room is more forward. And then, I finally found it. Wait a minute! Mr. Hengon didn’t tell me which locker number I had! Gosh. So I went all the way back “ Um, Mr. Hengon, do you know my locker number? ” I asked nervously “ Oh, apologizes that I forgot to tell you. Your locker number is 259. ” he said
“ Thank you. ” I told him “You’re welcome. ” and so I had to walk again to that hallway. I saw the same people. So I just walked around and was nervously silent. They still looked at me. I had my supplies in a bag and my notebooks on my hands. My lunch and snack was in my sky blue backpack that I was using it. I got to locker 259. I did not know the code. I was worried. So I bumped my head and went back. “ 3010 . ” he said and I headed back. So I got there and putted my notebooks on the floor and putted the code. I opened it and grabbed my notebooks. I organized them from largest to smallest. Under was a squared hole. It was obviously for my backpack. I took off my backpack and putted it in there. I had this box that was in the size of my materials and it was to put them in there.
It could close and you had to put this thingy up to secure it. So that was it, I closed my locker and locked it with the lock. After I came in to the
classroom. My cheeks were red. “ Well Welcome! You seem to be the first student to come in. I’m your teacher, Ms. Janette. I am pleased to meet you. ” she said smiling. We shook hands “ So your name is...”
“ Zoe. Zoe Florence Laine. ” I said. “ How old are you? ” she asked
“ Um, I’m fourteen and a half. I will be fifteen soon. ” I said “ Oh nice.
So if you’re interested to keep a diary... I know tons of girls like to keeps diaries. I don’t know about boys but they can keep one, too. ” she said. “ Oh, thank you. ” I said “ You’re welcome. Here, come pick one. ”
I mean, a teacher NEVER gave me away a notebook for me to keep it as a dairy. So here it is, this is what I am writing on. I don’t write " dear diary " because that’s not my style. My style is " Chapter ".

Comments (33)

autorenew

175 days ago
also 8th graders dont even act like this. are you trying to make 8th graders look bad? im a 8th grader and no one is mean at all. except for a few people, but they're just trying to be funny. and also, usually when someone is mean, they are also hurting. when u r older, ull understand.
175 days ago
its way too cliched. also plz dont copy dork diaries and mention CCP. this story shouldnt even be allowed to be here. who wrote this? a fourth grader? i cant believe im wasting my time to write a comment on this unbelievably stupid story.
182 days ago
@Alessa hi! your story is great! i always wanted to write a teen romance but i didn't know where to start :c btw thx for the inspiration, im going to mention a character reading the book in my story!!!
444 days ago
If you get someone to quick read through it and better formatting then in allthetests, it would be perfect! You could get it published!!!
484 days ago
Alessa

This was amazing!!!! To be honest, if you fix the spelling and grammar mistakes (putted, meant to be put; I got in, meant to be i went in), you could actually get it published
536 days ago
Just wondering were you inspired by Dork diaries
591 days ago
@Violette I’m already working on it sorry I took so long..
607 days ago
Oh well no problem!
(It's Anshika!)
-Anshika
627 days ago
Well, however I’m practicing my grammar and spelling because I want to have no mistakes. I know ‘putted’ is ‘put’ (well.. I first thought it was putted.. I know very weird until I realized that ‘putted’ didn’t exist..
627 days ago
Hi @Anshika
I didn’t write much because the device I used got disabled. I remembered my password but I thought I put this new one (forgetful X( ). However, there will be a musical and I want to audition for a character at my school. So I’ve been busy studying the lines. Yes, I’m interested in being an actress. So that’s why I’ve been busy with lines and exams at school. I really look forward downloading in my new device.. really.
630 days ago
@Alessa
:)
Have u written fifth part?
I've read all four....
So I'm checking fifth one out on two!
See u later 💙💜
654 days ago
@💗 what policies?
654 days ago
@Anshika hi sure I would like to be friends with you. I’m sorry for not answering before! I have been very busy and hardly could finish book number five. I will continue working harder on it.
704 days ago
I'm 13 on 3rd September...
Yet 12....
704 days ago
Hey Alessa would u like to be friends with me???????
704 days ago
When is fifth one coming???????????????????
716 days ago
Hey ( I'm Andrea only)
Awesome fan fiction!
I've read your fourth series too
It's amazing!!
732 days ago
This book was an inspiration of the TV series of Violetta and Soy Luna. I’m not quite sure which is the age rating though..
734 days ago
Age rating?
776 days ago
I just did dear diary books wiki in Fandom as Zoeysha