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Two Girls In Love

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5 Chapter - 1.481 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 2,563 taken- The story is completed - 4 people like it

Two girls, Lola and Beatrice, meet each other at a park and start chatting. Eventually, the fall in love with each other and begin dating. There are some problems along the way. Lola’s parents are VERY homophobic, and Beatrice’s parents just got a divorce, and she didn’t want to give them any more big news to think about. And the girls want to keep their sexuality and the fact that they’re dating a secret. So what happens when they have to announce what’s really going on between them?

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Beatrice was taking her little brother, Jake, to the park. He was going crazy at home, and Beatrice couldn’t handle it any longer. The minute they reached the park, Jake ran away, and Beatrice plopped down on one of the many benches. She pulled out her phone and starting texting her boyfriend, Tyler, whom she’d only been dating for a week.
She said “Hi”.
Tyler replied back. “Hey”.
“How are you?”
“I’m good, what about you?”
“I’m ok, I guess. I had to take my brother to the park. Ugh!”
“Ha, fun.”
“Yeah, not really lol.”
“Well anyways, I miss you Beatrice. You’re so beautiful.”
Beatrice paused. She didn’t know what to say. The truth was, she was only dating Tyler because she was super popular and she would’ve felt bad if she had turned him down when he asked her out. So she said yes. But nobody really knew the truth about Beatrice. She wasn’t straight, like everyone thought she was. No.
Beatrice was actually bisexual.

Comments (23)

autorenew

22 days ago
hii, so i wrote this story over a year ago and i honestly cringe when i look at it. i think the plot is weird and i dont understand why i made two strangers break up with their former relationships for each other. i also completely forgot to add the part with the parents so whoops. just wanted to say ty to everyone who commented such sweet things. i personally dont like the way i wrote this story, but the fact that i have gotten nothing but sweet comments written by people who acc liked this means a lot, so thank you so much. i promise my writing has gotten so much better. i now write actual good stories lol, and maybe i'll post more on here one day. ty for the love and support, it means so much! have an amazing day! and remember; you are beautiful, strong, and amazing. be you and only you. i love you
22 days ago
@♡ HerBloodRateLessons ♡ i'm so sorry, just know there are so many people who love you. you are amazing just the way you are.
89 days ago
It is kinda weird because I’m bisexual but I like girls more so I’m on the same page with Naomi, but I haven’t come out yet because scared help me please
129 days ago
I really liked it. It was cute, I'm bi sexual but mostly to guys.
133 days ago
Eugh I thought it would be about a boy and a girl, not 2 girls. I thought the two girls in the title were best friends
138 days ago
They are lucky.. They didnt get teased for being lesbian. :/
And they lived a happy life..
Most of us do.
not
me
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138 days ago
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145 days ago
i really liked this it was nice and wholsome thats somthing that in my opinon is kinda rare .
184 days ago
my gf and I met online tho but we didn’t know each other
184 days ago
wow thank was a good story I myself am gay and it was pretty relatable but my parents aren’t homophobic
288 days ago
Nice girl, This is like how a writer’s story. OwO
367 days ago
Kittz_Frenz Ik it doesn’t make sense and is kinda weird at some parts but like I said, I was rushing and didn’t rlly focus on making every part filled with detail. I’m much better at writing stories now, but I just wanted to see how my first one on here would do. And I’m a person too. So even if u don’t like the story, u don’t need to complain. Also, if u didn’t like it, why did u keep reading the whole thing anyway?
442 days ago
Well. Their parents??
442 days ago
Girl: sitting next: ok imma look at chu cuz im gay n stuff

Girl2: oH thats cool im bi. Ur pretty

Girl: u 2

Girl 2: owO

Girl: ok ill break up with my bf and be suth a stranger!!! OwO

Girl 2: OWuuuu who??

Girl: u lol now lets date but idl u but who cares.

WHAT A GOOD LESSON. DATE UR STRANGERS 👌
541 days ago
I know parts of it don’t make sense, and I’m sorry, I was rushing lol. And I never even finished it, but I don’t know how to go back to make changes. Sorry guys! Lol 😂
557 days ago
I love it! But did they tell their parents??
639 days ago
However I'm confused as to how they like each other as soon as they meet? Why would Beatrice break up with her boyfriend right as she meets somebody else?
639 days ago
I really like this, good job ^^
675 days ago
Wow! This is amazing!
705 days ago
Thank you Raven, I really appreciate your comment!