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That One Girl

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The story of a girl who was home-schooled all her life and then got sent to public school. Smart and shy, labeled as nerdy for no reason, she catches the attention of the most popular boy at school...


“Turn to page 364 class. ”The bland voice of Mr.Thomkins droned.
There was a rustling of papers as the students complied. ”That was a sufficient amount of time to have read and processed that. Please summarize it for me.” A dead silence followed.”Really? Not one of you has anything to say about it? ”Minerva Zimmerman raised her hand.”Yes, Miss Zimmerman?”
“ Geography is the study of people and places on Earth. Geographers are people who study geography. ... When geographers study the environment, they think about five big themes: place, region, location, movement, and human-environment interactions. Geographers study the physical and cultural features of a place.” She said. ”Precisely Miss Zimmerman. Class dismissed.”
“Look at who’s so smart,” Nina sneered to her group of fashionable, pink clad followers after class. They giggled dutifully. ”Too bad you can't have some smarts about fashion, then you might not look like one of my nightmares.” “I find it quite flattering that you dream about me.” Minerva responded coolly. Nina slowly turned red. ”You..you, how, you ignorant HOME-SCHOOLER! You know that’s not what I meant!”
“I was under the impression that you were making fun of me because I was too smart for your taste.” And with that, she turned and stalked off.
“Listen girls. We will get her back for that. Oh yes we will...”

Comments (12)


106 days ago
421 days ago
add more!!!! Por Favor!!!!! (Please)
516 days ago
I couldn’t really tell what happened there.... the main character seems like a complete jerk.
548 days ago
needs more pls and thx
646 days ago
short but well written nice job
680 days ago
Thank you so much ellie!!!
694 days ago
a fith grader, its kinda funny how your like: remember to use commas! this book is amazing and sexy ravenclaw, GOOD WORK!
721 days ago
Thank you very VERY much for commenting!!!
721 days ago
I thought I commented here, anyway I'm waiting for the next one!
724 days ago
Very good, remember to add commas!!!
Great cliffhanger.
I suggest giving all antagonists backstories so the story is more realistic.
Nice writing, but try to balance dialogue and narration. I think first person is more interesting.
726 days ago
THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
728 days ago
Darn it keep writing more!!!!