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That One Girl #2
1 Chapter - 509 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 704 taken-The story is currently being written - 3 people like it
The story of a girl who was home-schooled all her life and then got sent to public school. Smart and shy, labeled as nerdy for no reason, she catches the attention of the most popular boy at school...
Great cliffhanger.
I suggest giving all antagonists backstories so the story is more realistic.
Nice writing, but try to balance dialogue and narration. I think first person is more interesting.
KEEP WRITING OR I WILL🦄YOUR TOES
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