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Marlow hates moving around. She can't keep a boy for longer than three weeks. She always leaves her best friends when they are at the best. Can she play better this time around?
Well... it could use some work and there’s a lot of punctuation to work on and you could use a bit of detail. And I personally wouldn’t take a boy back like that. Also, in the description it told us about her moving when in the book it doesn’t say a word about that.
Best thing ever I might start doing something like this 🙏 thanks for the inspiration
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