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Breaking All Over Again
3 Chapter - 1.154 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 717 taken-The story is currently being written
Marlow and Aidan run into trouble, while taking a end-of-school trip. A blond girl wants to ruin their relationship, and will stop at nothing. But neither will Marlow & Aidan!
Let me know if you guys like this one! Be sure to like and comment! #AllOverAgain
Well... it could use some work and there’s a lot of punctuation to work on and you could use a bit of detail. And I personally wouldn’t take a boy back like that. Also, in the description it told us about her moving when in the book it doesn’t say a word about that.
Best thing ever I might start doing something like this 🙏 thanks for the inspiration
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