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That one girl...

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A brief character sketch of each of the main characters!

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    Minerva Zimmerman


    Age:15
    Grade:10
    Favorite Color: Orange
    Hobbies: Reading, coding, swimming.
    Immediate Family: Mother and 3 younger siblings.
    Pets: German Shepherd
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Peanut butter.

    Nina Carrington

    Age:15
    Grade:10
    Favorite Color: Hot Pink
    Hobbies: Flirting, bullying, fashion.
    Family: Mother, Father.
    Pets: Pug
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Cookie dough

    Lila Lemmings

    Age:15
    Grade:10
    Favorite Color: Blush Pink
    Hobbies: Going along with her BFFs (Nina) plans, fashion, shopping.
    Family: Mother, Father.
    Pets: Parrot
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Lemon

    John Comstock

    Age:15
    Grade:10
    Favorite Color: Plum Purple
    Hobbies: Swimming, video games, drawing.
    Family: Mother, Father,1 older brother
    Pets: None
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Chocolate

    Ellie Landon

    Age:14
    Grade:9
    Favorite Color: Olive green
    Hobbies: Coding, tech, poetry
    Family: Father, Mother,5 older siblings
    Pets:29 ducks
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Strawberry

    Phil Jennings

    Age:15
    Grade:10
    Favorite Color: Yellow
    Hobbies: Basketball, cooking, ballet
    Family: Mother and Father and 1 little sister
    Pets: Cat
    Favorite ice cream flavor: Vanilla


Comments (9)

autorenew

17 days ago
needs more pls and thx
115 days ago
short but well written nice job
149 days ago
Thank you so much ellie!!!
163 days ago
a fith grader, its kinda funny how your like: remember to use commas! this book is amazing and sexy ravenclaw, GOOD WORK!
190 days ago
Thank you very VERY much for commenting!!!
190 days ago
I thought I commented here, anyway I'm waiting for the next one!
193 days ago
Very good, remember to add commas!!!
Great cliffhanger.
I suggest giving all antagonists backstories so the story is more realistic.
Nice writing, but try to balance dialogue and narration. I think first person is more interesting.
KEEP WRITING OR I WILL💗YOUR TOES
195 days ago
THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
=D
197 days ago
Darn it keep writing more!!!!