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Revenge

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Story of how a girl gets revenge on her cheating boyfriend. (Characters: Riley, Cameron, Sonjah, Yana, Luis.)

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    Once upon a time, there was a girl named Riley. She had a boyfriend named Cameron, who she thought was loyal. But was actually cheating. She would always believe everything he said because, of course, she thought he was not lying. However, one day she got a little suspicious of him and decided to follow him. After at least 30 minutes, he reached a house. A few hours later, he got out. Riley decided to go back home because she didn't get any evidence.

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    Another night, Cameron went out again. She was a little anxious, but she went to sleep because she was awfully tired. In the morning, Cameron was still gone. She woke up, ate breakfast, brushed her teeth, changed, and went out. After a few minutes of walking, she spotted Cameron, talking to another girl. She ran to him and asked him who she was, he said that it's his step-sister and that's why they look so- not alike. Once again, she believed him and went to the store.

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    Riley was picking out some clothes, when her friend Yana came and asked, "Riley, did you break up with your boyfriend?" Riley was so confused. She asked why Yana asked. And her friend showed her a post on Instagram. It was, her BOYFRIEND with another girl named Sonjah. Riley was heartbroken.

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    Riley rushed outside, she then saw her boyfriend, Cameron kissing Sonjah. She cried her eyes out. Her sister comforted her and said that she should get revenge. Riley asked how. And her sister said, "Maybe you should dress up fancy at school and humiliate him."
    Riley grinned. "I'll do just that."

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    At school, Riley walked to Cameron and his best friend, Luis. She asked if he would meet her in front of the lockers between class A2 and A3. After school, he went there, and surprisingly people were there. Riley was waiting for him and when she started speaking, she said... "I need to tell you something.." He asked what she needed to talk about. She then says, "we're breaking up cheater. You should really learn how to be more sneaky on cheating." Everyone laughed, even his best friend. Riley felt free. Luis did not want to be best friends with someone who is disliked.
    Eventually, Cameron moved to another school because of bullying.

    The End.

Comments (28)

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42 days ago
Most of these comment are by the same person (the writer). All the numbers are the same 😂
210 days ago
It's time for the Blueberry Festival, and everyone in town is busy getting ready. Kylie Jean Carter's momma is baking pies, her pa is picking berries, and Kylie is thinking about becoming the Blueberry Queen.
211 days ago
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212 days ago
I compelelty loved it, such a beautiful work of art, *sheds a tear*story i meant. I give it 5 stars plus.

As i saw this got a lot of views/comments in a short amount of time, it really seems that you are the best writer ever. I really mean it.

I hope you make more stories like this, thanks. ;-(
212 days ago
hellooooo in response to the comments from "..." (lol it would be easier if it was an actual name but y'know this works too)
212 days ago
oh, and "Pervverse" was ment to be perverse, sorry
212 days ago
Enter your comment here.
Attention! Pervverse or violence glorifying writing ect. is forbidden! This is also not a dating site!

Just a friendly reminder.
212 days ago
erm great story i er loved it
212 days ago
Oh...................................... ........................................ ........................................ ........................................ .........
212 days ago
of course i'm real why wouldn't i *oink*
212 days ago
wait Peppa Pig is real?!
212 days ago
Age rating? i rly wanna tell thi sto my younger friends (they are both 9 years of age).
212 days ago
love it. i was only gonna say that but then its too short so um good job
212 days ago
*oink* i really loved it *oink*
212 days ago
*giggles quielty* ty pinkalicious
212 days ago
I totally agree with you
that this is the greatest commenting ever "ValerieUwU kiddo" 🙂
212 days ago
Lmao, that's the greatest thing in the uniseverse that i've ever heard
212 days ago
sry
212 days ago
well i was expressing how i feel that WAY
212 days ago
you've could of said you were happy