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I say 'Goodbye' to you

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This is a song/text about a person who becomes bullied.

ATTENTION: It's about suicide. Not everyone can handle that.

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    I say 'Goodbye' to you

    1st: You treat me like dirt.
    You tear my heart into pieces.
    You make my soul wept.
    You killing me from the inside.
    What I've done to you?

    refrain: I say 'Goodbye' to you.
    I just can't take it anymore.
    I'm leaving this world.
    Nothing's keeping me here anymore.

    2nd: Look at my heart,
    it's bleeding.
    Heavy.
    Unstoppable.
    Nothing can stop this bleeding.
    Impossible.
    But...
    ... I can end the pain.

    refrain: I say 'Goodbye' to you.
    I just can't take it anymore.
    I'm leaving this world.
    Nothing's keeping me here anymore.

    You're just laughing at me anyway.
    You're just mocking me anyway.
    You're insulting me anyway.
    You're just adding pain to me anyway.
    Give me one good reason why I should stay.
    Hope?
    It's been dead a long time.

    Goodbye!
    (I say 'Goodbye' to you.
    I just can't take it anymore.
    I'm leaving this world.
    Nothing's keeping me here anymore.)

    And I'll die with it.

Comments (3)

autorenew

5 days ago
You’re right. People could think that suicide is the better choice but it isn’t.
6 days ago
I know I'll receive criticism for my comment, but I just want to make sure that everyone can view this poem without getting the wrong ideas about suicide.
6 days ago
I was really suicidal for a while. Suicide doesn't stop the pain. I got therapy, and I feel fine now, but people who see this poem might believe the wrong things. Yes, you added a warning at the beginning but still, this is a harmful poem.

To anyone who thinks that suicide is the way to go, it's not. You aren't taking away the pain, you're just giving ten times the pain to ten times the people. Think of all the things life is worth living for, even the smallest things like s'mores and butterflies.