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Check out this song I wrote! It's pretty bad, but anyway. Just look if you want I guess.

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    Maybe, if you let me go
    Then I wouldn't have to know
    What you did
    And yet I realised… that…

    I'm never lonely
    Yet sometimes I need a friend
    Because every time
    That I see the bend
    I know…
    That this is the furthest you'll ever let me go

    And then I try my hardest
    But it never quite works out
    I believe I'll find
    What I'm missing out on

    Maybe, if you let me go
    I wouldn't have to know
    What you did
    And yet I realised…that…


    AUTHOR'S NOTE:
    I know this is cringy, but it's a work in progress, and since I can't give you the tune it seems worse than it is.

Comments (4)

autorenew

2 days ago
Nice! I like it!
124 days ago
This is awesome! I can relate to it in real life so much!
143 days ago
Hm, I suggest making more words on one line since when there’s two words on each lines it means to do a quick stop. Also add a verse that you’ll repeat, it doesn’t have to big or mean much. If it doesn’t mean much then it can easily be put in.
187 days ago
Oh my goddd!

THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVED HOW IT SOUNDED WHEN I SANG IT!