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After the Middle School Dance-2

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This is what happened after the first dance of the year. Comment what you thought please.

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    A few days after...he (A) walked up to me and tried to start a conversation. I completely ignored him. Now on the bus he asked me a question and I hea
    A few days after...he (A) walked up to me and tried to start a conversation. I completely ignored him. Now on the bus he asked me a question and I heard just I didn't answer. I was sitting alone in the bus seat and next thing I know is A is now sitting next to me. I told him to move and his reaction was "AHA I GOT YOU TO CRACK" I could not stop laughing. The girl in front of us 'Zoie' she mouthed to me "Ooooohhh you like him....." I instantly say ewww just to make sure she doesn't suspect a thing. A goes ewww...

    Read next chapter for more...comment what you think so far

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    I asked how he knew what we were talking about.... he said Oh I heard Zoie. Wow.... I said. After he heard me say eww he hasn't talked to me much....

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    But a few months ago...he made a cuttie catcher....he wrote on there 'do you like me?' I got it and said no only as a friend. He got sad and said "D*** it" I felt so bad because then I knew he liked me....

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    He almost always starts the conversations except he hangs out with other girls. He also focuses more on me then one of his best friends. And the when one of his best friends said I could get a boyfriend if I wanted to (It was to me) A replies hinking I can't hear him " Yeah she can it will be me" I freaked inside.

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    HOPE YOU LIKED THIS PLEASE COMMENT WHAT YOU THOUGHT AND WHAT I SHOULD WRITE ABOUT NEXT!
    HOPE YOU LIKED THIS PLEASE COMMENT WHAT YOU THOUGHT AND WHAT I SHOULD WRITE ABOUT NEXT!

Comments (6)

autorenew

581 days ago
Nice fan fiction Dakota
Can you please write more
771 days ago
From your girl CC12
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771 days ago
Great Dakota! Amazing fan fic!
I love it
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787 days ago
Gray, Ill help. Thanks everyone!!!!!
797 days ago
Cool story bro! Also, I was hoping that I could get your opinion on the story I want to write? I was thinking of doing something like a journal entry thing, write about me life (because my life is crazy insane, and also make an interesting story) anyway how does that sound? I’ll also give you a shout out in my story if you’re willing to help me out, give me your opinion? Let me know, thanks!
800 days ago
This was really good! You should write more!