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Middle School, Something I Know Nothing About: Ep. 7 (My Alt Life)

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So, here's more of Nikki's story. Will she and her friends end up going to the dance...
Or will arguments keep them apart?

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"Can somebody PLEASE tell me why I agreed to this," I muttered as Kayley gave me "constructive criticism" on my dancing that usually involved her saying, "No, Nikki, that's wrong," and hardly telling me WHAT I was doing wrong. Finally she said,
"This is hopeless with only one person!"
"What, do you want me to get all my friends over here for a dancing lesson?" I responded.
"That's not a bad idea," Mom said as she entered the room, "but I think you'll need another teacher besides Kayley."
"Wait--we're actually doing that?" I asked, disbelieving. "Dancing lessons--with Kayley?"
"We can invite your friends over Saturday afternoon," Mom responded, "and Kayley won't be the only person teaching. By the way, don't you think it's time we met our neighbours?"

Comments (26)

autorenew

690 days ago
The final one is out!
743 days ago
I should probably make the next one of these soon...
771 days ago
I suggest you make it till chapter ten.
Also, thanks for commenting on my The Ballet Shoe story!!!!! Pls check out my quizzes under my nickname— Neveah Hor. Thanks!
772 days ago
Well, maybe not years. Months maybe? A couple of years? IDK
772 days ago
Thanks! How long do u think I should make it? I literally have no plan and might just keep making these for like, years if I have nothing else to do
772 days ago
I like this........................
773 days ago
Ok I wrote the 6th
784 days ago
GUYS I NEED IDEAS! I'VE RUN OUT AFTER EPISODE 5, AND IF I DON'T HAVE ANY, I CAN'T WRITE MORE! (Me thinks*: That's obvious) SO PLZ, IF YOU HAVE AAANNNY IDEAS AAT AALLL,
TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
788 days ago
Episode 5 is coming out soon!
805 days ago
Episode 4 will come out soon. Sorry it's taken so long! I've been distracted@_@
814 days ago
And, a question for people who go to public/private schools, is horseback riding something that people might decide to make a club about, or would it be completely outside of school?
814 days ago
Okay, thx.
814 days ago
Uh oh. Hello AddyNick. I just wanted to let you know that my "does he really like you?" test, the one that we've been commenting on, isn't under my name in "my tests" anymore!!! So just to let you know, if you ever want to look for it, go to the homepage "love/relationship quizzes" and search, right about the comments section in the search bar, "the love test to end all love tests". You should find it there. Sorry!
815 days ago
Yeah I like it! I'd call it a series.
815 days ago
Because DO PEOPLE NOT LIKE COMMENTING OR SOMETHING???
815 days ago
Do you like these... IDK what to call them??? A series, with episodes??? Episodes, like a series???
815 days ago
Congrats!
816 days ago
I don't have an iPad, but I managed to write Ep. 3!
817 days ago
Yikes that's never happened to me before 😬 sorry I guess I'm not much help. Maybe try typing up your quiz on another device? Family computer? iPad? Anything? (Honestly I don't have an iPad so if you don't, join the club)
818 days ago
And here's something more important: when I click on somethings it often says, "conform sub remission," or "your search timed out," or "this site can't be reached." I have seriously tried to write episode 3 like 6 TIMES and it keep on saying that--does anyone know how to stop this from happening so often?