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Dying (part I)

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A young girl named Isabella finds herself trapped in a world of fighting, death, and magic. Once her friend dies all she can do is fight back.

    I woke up to find myself in a dark room. What happened? I thought. Then I remembered. Ophelia. What was she thinking? Dying. Monsters. Magic.
    I have to get out of here right now. They are after me. But I couldn’t move. I was frozen in time. In a block of ice. I panicked. What do I do?
    “Help!” I screamed.

    “Isabella, wake up! You were muttering in your sleep.” Said a small voice next to me.
    I opened my eyes. “Where are we and what happened?” I asked the girl, Elizabeth. “Was it all a dream?”
    “No, Bella. Ophelia's dead, and the only thing we can do is avenge her.” She replied.

Comments (4)


348 days ago
it's a bit short but.................:((((((((((((((((
636 days ago
Good,but bit short
1303 days ago
I like it! It’s a good story gonna go read number 2 now
1303 days ago
This was good! It was short, though.