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Dying (part 3)

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This is the story before Ophelia's death.

    So here’s how it happened. One day I was at home when I got a frantic call from my friends. They were both at Ophelia’s house, and something strange had happened. Green slime covered the floor and her parents were gone. Then I heard her scream and I lost connection.
    I ran outside and got on my bike. When I got to her house I saw a faint green glow coming from the windows. I ran inside, and upstairs.
    “Ope-” Then I saw. Green monsters were surrounding her. I pulled out my knife, and sliced them in half. “Guys, please explain.” I said.
    “Isabella, look out!” Ophelia screamed as she jumped behind me.
    I turned around just as I saw a Green Monster swallow her whole.”Ophelia!” I screamed as I killed the monster.
    But it was too late.

Comments (4)


502 days ago
it's a bit short but.................:((((((((((((((((
790 days ago
Good,but bit short
1457 days ago
I like it! It’s a good story gonna go read number 2 now
1457 days ago
This was good! It was short, though.