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The Interplanet Art Academy--Spies And Seeing (2)

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She didn't see color.
She didn't feel much.
She has to find five others, but there are at least sixteen of them.

Margaret Joe-Bob

Wednesday, only three days after I had come here, was the worst. Monday and Tuesday had been horrible, but today was heinous. The first week, we were learning a different type of dance every day. And today, we needed a partner.
Of course, no one wanted to be my partner. So Signora Lulu, one of the two dance teachers, had to tell someone that they had to be my partner.
The reason why nobody wanted to be my partner? Simple. I constantly threw up. Or coughed. Or just dry heaved.
Which was why Benjamin Samuel was trying to lean as far away from me as possible. When we were released for a bathroom break, I was first to leave and first to get back.
"Margaret, that was incredibly fast," Signora Lulu observed.
"What of it?" I asked.
"The students will come around in time. Maybe someday you will not get so sick as quick," she replied. "You work hard, though. That is all I ask of my students. For them to work hard at this. To be patient. Now, it is almost time to start again."

Comments (9)


217 days ago
🙏🏽 Plllllllllleeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssse!!!!
217 days ago
This. Is. Awesome. Please add more!!!
344 days ago
cool this is a very good story or should I say fan fiction
479 days ago
Kaity neveah...

I haven't read this in awhile lol but I feel like you squished me and nhyt together. Tbh I forget if the name was a coincidence or- mmm
544 days ago
631 days ago
AllTheTests is glitching when I try to write the fifth, so it may be a while until the next comes out. And thank you and you're welcome, Kaity
647 days ago
This is awesome. thanks for writing
659 days ago
However, anything that happened with Yvonne outside of Penelope's dorm is still Yvonne. Sorry for the mistake. If you notice any other inconsistencies, please tell me so I can fix it
659 days ago
I have noticed a mistake. Yvonne Anderson cannot be in Jania/Margaret's dorm at the same time as Penelope's. Instead of Yvonne in Penelope's room, I am switching her with Colette Claw (a character who hasn't been mentioned yet in this story)