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Linda was a normal mother until she finds her daughter acting strange.

You see, my oldest daughter died 2 years ago around this time. See, she was kidnapped by my ex-fiance Michael. He always hated the idea of a child coming between us. One day I got very sick, I had to stay in the hospital for two months and a week. So Michael had to take care of Sophia for that amount of time. Sophia was wild, obviously, she was in her terrible 4’s. He had anger issues. Once I got back from the hospital, I noticed a lot of red marks on her. She was very skittish and scared of me when I put my hands up, thinking I was going to hit her. After a week of being back around, Sophia wanted to speak less and less of what she did when I was gone. Of course, I want only the best for her; but when I am not told what happened and how she grew while I was gone, I get extremely worried.

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138 days ago
When’s part two comeing and if it already is out let me now I know it’s a bit late but please tell me thx
1210 days ago
More Coming Soon!!!!!! Keep the hope and your faith shall be returned!
1420 days ago
More pls!
1499 days ago
Thank you for the comments Keep them coming we love feedback Also every comment you get a new chapter!!!
1503 days ago
wow good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1527 days ago
1539 days ago
This was an assignment so, please comment so I can know if it's any good!!!