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The Queen's Pride

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So, this a cheesy fairy tale type thing I wrote, and it's pretty short.

The Mistake

Once there was a family who lived in a small, quaint cottage. They had one proud daughter named Kathleen and one kind and plain-looking daughter named Rosette.
Kathleen was by far the most beautiful girl in the entire kingdom. One day she went for a walk in the woods. On her return journey, she met a man who could grant and take away wishes, sitting by his mansion. He was so struck by her beauty that he told her she should have anything she desired.
“I wish I were queen,” replied Kathleen. “And I could control who was hungry and poor, and those who were rich and important. I wish that some handsome prince would fall in love with me and be king of the land and we would rule for many years happily.”

Comments (3)


1201 days ago
Thank you! That means so much to me!
1201 days ago
This was great and NOT cheesy! Thanks.
1204 days ago
Will you post your favorite chapter? I like chapter three: The Redemption best.