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TYOA: Kirsten And Casey

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It's book five! This is the closest time I've made two of these books together! And Casey is going to show up!

"Kirsten, help me cook dinner," Frederick bossed. I rolled my eyes.
"SURE, Frederick. What am I doing?" I replied.
"The baked potatoes," he replied. I grabbed the potatoes and dumped them into the sink, then grabbed one and began furiously scrubbing it. Why did Mom and Dad always let Frederick order me around? He didn't order VICKI around, and she was almost the same age as me. Come to think of it, Vicki ALSO ordered me around, she was just subtler about it. Sure, I couldn't help in the garden because if I stayed outside to long my grass allergy kicked in. Sure, I had so many allergies it often seemed my family thought I was a burden. Sure, there was plenty I couldn't do. But what about what I COULD do? Why couldn't they just appreciate me for that, instead of demanding, "Kirsten, help out with cleaning more," when I WAS cleaning, or "help cook more," when I WAS, or just ANYTHING. SERIOUSLY, guys.
"You're not attacking the potatoes, Kirsten," Frederick berated.
"I wish you would stop talking to me," I muttered under my breath. Nonetheless, I eased up a bit, in case of further scoldings.
Soon we were sitting at the table, forks at the ready.
"Thanks, Frederick, for these lovely potatoes," Mom said, as if she hadn't had baked potatoes for dinner a thousand times.
Yeah, you don't thank ME, of course, I thought, you just thank Frederick, who only cooked bacon.
"May I be excused?" I asked.
"You haven't eaten your--oh, you did. How'd you eat it that fast?" Vicki said.
"My secret," I teased, sliding out of my seat and exiting. Audios, and hola to my secret hiding space. My secret hiding place was a secret passage in the main closet I'd found a few years ago. I slept with Vicki, so this was the only private space I had.
Oh, look, there are my pencils and paper...

Comments (39)


34 days ago
this is cool!!!!! Adam (or whatever his name is) is Creepy! But in a cool way. I LOVE IT.
281 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
296 days ago
How many of these are there again
316 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
317 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
357 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
453 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
464 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
467 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
474 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
474 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
514 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
517 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
534 days ago
But thanks
534 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
536 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
547 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
548 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
548 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
557 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)