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The Alchemy

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Chapter one of ' The Alchemy '...
If you're wondering what's alchemy, it is related to chemistry and potions and all that kind of stuff. In this story, Carson, grade six, goes on an adventure......
For chapter one, it's an introduction which is kind of important so, please read! After chapter 1, I will release chapter two on 9 October.

    Chapter 1--Introduction ( Carson's life )

    Ring! The school bell rang, signalling the start of freedom and the end of misery. Student dashed out of their classrooms like a horde of prisoners set free. Bolting out of school, Carson strolled towards her house. " I hate my life," Carson muttered as tears welled up in her eyes. Opening the old squeaky wooden door, Carson sighed. the house was nearly empty, it was merely just an empty fridge, an old wooden table. Sigh...

    Carson sat on the chair, wondering why her father was even addicted to gambling. Her eyes fell on a piece of paper on the table, it was a paper of promise never to leave the house except school. Ever since Carson's mother disappeared a year ago, Father would say: We'll find where mum is.
    Until, he became a gambler. To add salt to the wound, Carson failed to get the scholarship that day.

    Willing to let the tears fall, Carson sobbed. As she did, she turned to her bird which her mother made out of alchemy and said, " You know, life sucks." She named the bird Perry and sadly it was going to turn back into stones sooner or later. Wiping her tears in sorrow, she knitted a scarf as winter was going to arrive. She reminisced about the past when her mum taught her how to sew stuff. As she looked out of the window, she spotted a girl mumbling some words, those words became blur liquid and then it became blue. The girl calmly collected the liquid in a tube. Shock was written all over Carson's face-- were her eyes playing tricks on her?

Comments (10)


702 days ago
Well I actually more like skimmed it, not rlly skipped :o=O¦ (hehehe he has a body)
702 days ago
okay, i get it AddyNick, not a Must to check it out;)
703 days ago
Glare is good too. But I didn't finish it. It was too creepy for me, so I just went to the end of the chapters and read them
703 days ago
Thank you for checking this out!! Really appreciate it.
705 days ago
Great story! 😄😄😄😄😄😄
728 days ago
omg this us awesome and so good
731 days ago
Hello! I wonder what will happen next. Carson's going to get rich by living in a hut!
And I wrote a fanfic called After Part 1, which is not in my tests yet but would appreciate if you could check it out when it is!
746 days ago
I can't wait! Well, I'll have 2 :D
747 days ago
I’ll release chapter three in early November :)
749 days ago
Hi NHYT! I wonder what Carson's plan is... good story!