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7 Kids - A Sad Life Part: 2 of Part 2

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This is part 2 of 7 kids a sad life

    "Uh oh..." all the friends said at the same time.

    The friends were all thrown into jail. James, Molly, Richard, Hannah, James and Max. But Max wasn't there. He betrayed his friends so there were six of them now. But there was something in the corner. It was a person. He had a scar on his eye and blue hair. He was also throwing a coin in the air and catching it.
    "Hello my friends," the boy said.
    "Um, who are you?" Richard asked the mysterious boy.
    "Don't you recognise me?" the boy said, with a grin on his face.
    The friends thought about that for a moment, then recognised the boy. "MAX!" Hannah screamed.
    "Yes," Max said. "Now you recognise me." he laughed like an evil villain. "Yes. I betrayed you. But it was to actually help you. You see, I got a call from a number I didn't recognise. So I talked to the mysterious caller and he told me to meet him at the hill near the gun shop in the desert. We talked for a moment and he gave me some stuff: Money, guns, food, drinks all that kind of stuff."
    "So all this..." James said. "Was a lie? You didn't stop liking us as friends?"
    "No!" Max laughed again like an evil villain. He didn't stop for about five minutes when a guard shut him up. "I have a plan." Max said. Then told his friends all about the plan how they were going to break out of jail. "First, we are going to use knock-out gas for the guards...because I have knock-out gas. Then, we are going to steal the guards key card and get out of here. Sounds good?"
    The friends all nodded along. They were finally going to break out of the prison. But they still couldn't get out of the 'being framed' thing. They never could because nobody believed them, and they lost any hope of actually getting out of that.
    "At lunch, we'll do the plan."
    Just at that moment, the bell rang for lunch. Max winked and ran out of the cell. "Let's go!" he said. Molly and the crew all ran with him. James took the bag where the stuff was stored for the prison break. He was so excited he nearly dropped the bag. When all of the friends sat down at a table bench, they took out some bottle that had knock-out gas inside it. They carefully threw it near a guard when he wasn't looking. Then, Max gave his friends some masks to protect them from being knocked out. All of the guards were down. They all made a run for it and didn't stop.
    "Where should we go?" Max asked.
    "To our tree house, silly!"

    If you want me to do part 3, just say in the comments. I will eventually do it. But i'll probably be late or something.

Comments (4)


548 days ago
Can you read my story? I gave your story 5 stars. Here's the link: https://www.allthetests.com/quiz37/quiz/1587074371/Im-An-Unpopular-Girly-Girl-Part-1
719 days ago
I have 4 sibling and my bff has 6 sibs ans soty family taylor has 5 sibs
760 days ago
You should do a part three at some point! I like this story...
760 days ago
I've made part 2 now!