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TYOA Parallel II

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A threat.

    The icy leaves above. Thrashing in the wind. A frigid chill in the air. She was cold. Never warm. It was cold. Never warm. Her protection against the elements was not as much as she first hoped it would be. Above her, was a threat. Below her, was a threat. Behind her, was a threat. Ahead, was a threat. East, South, West, North--they held a threat she could never leave behind. How could she, when it might mean her future would be changed?
    But any way, her future would change. She stumbled through the path, hoping she was on the right track. Her map had frozen, and when it thawed, it was so damp it could hardly be used. Whether or not she was on the right track could mean everything to many people.
    Many, many people.

Comments (39)


223 days ago
this is cool!!!!! Adam (or whatever his name is) is Creepy! But in a cool way. I LOVE IT.
470 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
485 days ago
How many of these are there again
505 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
506 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
546 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
642 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
653 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
656 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
663 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
663 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
703 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
706 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
723 days ago
But thanks
723 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
725 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
736 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
737 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
737 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
746 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)