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TYOA: The Chase (Book 8)

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8 Chapter - 2.295 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 556 taken- The story is completed

It's finally the next book, about a rhythmic gymnast like Kaity requested. Also, it has a chase scene that is hopefully better than the others!

I twirled the ribbon above my head, knowing I was doing it just right.
"All right, everyone, it's the end of class!" Coach announced. The sweaty, exhausted, happy girls made their way to the door. Luckily, this was the last class of the day for us at Belingear School. I walked to my house.
"How was school?" Mom inquired when I got home.
"Great," I lied. The only part of school that was great was Rhythmic Gymnastics class. Otherwise, well... my friends got into a lot of arguments. Every one at school, they were in. More often than not, they dragged me into them, too.
"Well that's good," Mom replied absently. I walked into my room and started on homework.
Math: annoying and hard, but I could do it.
Science: even more annoying and hard, but I liked it. And I was also terrible at it.
History: I'm boring everyone reading this. Let's get on with the story. (And yes, I did just break the fourth wall)

Comments (38)


146 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
161 days ago
How many of these are there again
181 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
182 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
222 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
318 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
329 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
332 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
339 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
339 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
379 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
382 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
399 days ago
But thanks
399 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
401 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
412 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
414 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
414 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
422 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)
425 days ago
Thx and sure NHYT! (Although I've long since written book 4:) I think in the next book/part/whatever-u-want-to-call-it I'm going 2 make a chase better. Well, more exciting and not a repeat of like, three other chases... am I just rambling? Bye!