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TYOA: The Rescue Mission (Book 10)

10 Chapter - 3.012 Words - Developed by:
- Developed on: - 667 taken- The story is completed

The end is near?
Told in several different points of view.
(Also, to warn you, there is a lot of action in this one)

I had apologized to my parents and family several times already, but I hadn't forgiven myself.
Who in their right mind trusts a stranger?
Well, I didn't exactly trust him. However, I did know that
Jason Davidson was suspicious, as he somehow knew what I wanted. Now I wonder why I wanted so much when I already had so much.
I had a loving, supporting family who forgave me for running away when I explained why I'd done it. Granted, it wasn't a smart way to deal with what happened, but... a knock on the door broke through my reverie. I opened the door, and gasped.
"Kirsten?" I exclaimed.

Comments (39)


748 days ago
this is cool!!!!! Adam (or whatever his name is) is Creepy! But in a cool way. I LOVE IT.
995 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
1010 days ago
How many of these are there again
1030 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
1031 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
1071 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
1167 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
1178 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
1181 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
1188 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
1188 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
1228 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
1231 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
1248 days ago
But thanks
1248 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
1250 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
1261 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
1262 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
1262 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
1271 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)