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Don't Wanna

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This poem is also about how something makes me feel.
But it's not like the last one!

    Hey Mom Hey Dad
    How are you
    And I'm not bad
    But if ya keep on asking
    And sayin' things about that
    And talking
    About that, you should know
    I don't like it when ya talk about that
    But I don't tell you, I don't say no
    When you say the dreaded, 'I'm impressed you could do (insert whatever I did)'
    Though I hate when you talk about that to anyone!
    But I still don't say no, I don't try to rid
    You of that talk
    Still I hate it and you don't know, you probably'll never know
    That when you start, in my mind the thing I do at the very suggestion is balk!
    So in my mind I'll be begging you to stop
    But I'm not communicating clearly!
    And trying to speak about it is a flop!
    I'll be pleading
    In my head
    But you're not hearing--nor reading--
    My face, my thoughts, my head
    You don't see there
    Nor that brick of lead.

Comments (9)


773 days ago
That's pretty much it, but only for certain things that I don't like being reminded of
774 days ago
I got this from your poem: you are embarrassed that your parents praise you, but can’t communicate that clearly.
776 days ago
What DO you guys think I'm saying in this poem? Just wondering if it's like, completely different then what I was thinking when I wrote it
777 days ago
Ooohh noice

Just tell then dude
784 days ago
It doesn't actually happen often.
784 days ago
Oh yeah. Neither do mine. Well then I'll go back to plan b 😁 TELL THEM! At least, if it's that serious, you should.
787 days ago
I don't think my parents ever use this site.
Also... they don't know my username
787 days ago
788 days ago
Tell your parents to read this