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What Could Be Wrong

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My fifth poem

    What's wrong
    What could be
    What could disrupt the song
    Of life?
    Why couldn't this instrument
    A fife
    Just keep on playing?
    A sister seemingly always annoyed
    Or withdrawn? Staying
    Somewhere estranged?
    Myself hiding
    Math enraged?
    Embarrassed, hiding
    Still here
    Also here I am writing
    One thing I'm not doing:
    Not doing it--but...
    Maybe I am?
    Or maybe I'm just stuck in a rut
    I don't know
    What could be wrong?
    What could be so low?
    A little brother always tired
    Someone's always...
    Annoyed, we're blessed, we're stressed
    Some hiding, some lying, some something
    What could be wrong?
    Our song of life singing
    This year
    What could be wrong?

Comments (8)


954 days ago
NHYT oof yh and u can maybe go on that period quiz by Anshika Jha IT'S VERY ACTIVE THERE and that's basically how u make friends lol
981 days ago
Thx! The Ballet Shoe was a pretty good story! I will check out ur quizzes, and we can b friends in here
982 days ago
Sorry, u*** must have
982 days ago
Great!!! I must have put in lots of effort to make those rhyme. I like your quizzes, AddyNick! And thanks for commenting on my story— The Ballet shoe!!! Haha! Create more pls!!!!!! And I realize TheQuizzyAddict and u are quite close!haha, I wanna join in to be one of ur online allthetests friend! Lol, pls check out my quizzes—- my nickname is Neveah Hor And I put another of my quiz under the name Neveah Ho....
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988 days ago
988 days ago
great poem
988 days ago
Noice ☺☺☺☺☺☺
990 days ago
How do you like it?