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Invisible Smoke

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A poem

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    It's hard to explain
    Make it clear
    Out there and plain
    Should I say
    A quiet ringing in my ears
    The worst part of the day
    It's unclear
    Waving, maybe
    Through the air
    Unseen
    Like invisible smoke
    That spreads its sheen
    Stings
    And hard as I try
    After, I can barely remember the thing
    It's like invisible smoke
    Unclear to can't see
    Did something shoot, maybe something broke
    Somewhere
    But how can I know?
    It's invisible smoke, hardly there
    Steam rising
    Fear coming
    Heart rushing
    I know it's here
    I don't know how
    Or where
    The invisible smoke is coming
    The fear is rushing
    The heart is rising
    I don't know where the
    Invisible smoke is
    I know it's around me
    Surrounding
    Everywhere, somewhere
    Fear rising
    Smoke heating
    Heart beating
    Surrounding
    Arising
    Heating, rushing
    Rising, beating
    Is the invisible smoke

Comments (6)

autorenew

709 days ago
Wellll maybe if you combine this with a couple other poems... I said it in them May be
719 days ago
What IS the invisible smoke anyways? Good poem!
719 days ago
Thanks guys 💕
720 days ago
Wow this is rlly good
720 days ago
You will be ok 💓💓💓😜😜😝😝😄😃😄😝😄😃😂😂😄😝😝😺😙
722 days ago
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