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Why Am I

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A poem by me.

    Why am I hurting
    Nothing is wrong today
    So what is this feeling?
    Am I hurting?
    'Cause that's what it feels like
    That's this feeling...
    Isn't it?
    That's what it seems like
    Doesn't it?
    You have been bit
    By the thing that never stops biting
    You have been hit
    By the thing that never stops hitting
    Unless something happens
    But what? What gets rid of this feeling?
    I don't know this--
    Why I am hurting
    That's what this feels like
    So isn't it hurt?
    Sometimes you love it and sometimes you hate it, this hike
    Called life
    This walk that makes you balk
    It's called life.
    I don't know.

Comments (5)


678 days ago
Thanks NHYT
685 days ago
I can relate to this poem toooo:))))) Well written one
687 days ago
Thanks guys
687 days ago
Woahhhhhh this was a great poem! I feel this way pretty of so I can really relate. ❤
688 days ago
I know exactly how you feel!Wow!I can really relate to this!Great job by ze way.