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The Christmas Season

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This is a poem I am writing about Christmas which is coming up very soon. And this is my second poem I’m writing.

Ho ho ho...

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    Christmas Poem

    Presents, stockings, mistletoes
    What a flow!
    It snows
    and the kids throw
    they throw the snow in the meadow which is filled with snow
    Couples kiss by the mistletoes
    What a combo!

Comments (3)

autorenew

304 days ago
This honestly isn't bad for a starter poem.. I've been writing poems for a while.. and usually you don't repeat words already there for example

Don't repeat:
"they throw the snow in the meadow which is filled with snow" (mainly because you use snow twice in there so it doesn't sound exactly right)

Also don't try so hard to make it rhyme not all poems do..
685 days ago
Thanks!!!!!! :•))))))
686 days ago
Wow this is a great poem!