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This is a poem about negativity. The poem describes how I feel a lot of the time so please no hate. This is very tough for me. If anyone else is going through this then please remember that you are not alone and that it will get better someday ๐Ÿ’–

    It swirls around my head all day
    It won't go away
    All it will do is stay
    Even when asleep I lay

    It will never leave me alone
    It has the harshest tone
    All it does to me is moan
    Just like a repeating drone

    I try to think like Positive
    But Positive won't live
    So instead of Positive
    Comes the dreadful Negative

    Negative keeps haunting me
    It won't let me be
    Why can't I be free without
    Negative screaming at me

Comments (23)


108 days ago
This poem is amazing.
@TheQuizzyAddict your problems are valid, and i'm sorry you're going through a hard time.โคโคโคโคโคโค
503 days ago
TheQuizzyAddict pls talk to someone. Your problems are valid too, donโ€™t ever think that theyโ€™re not.
525 days ago
hi (57826) 1 seconds ago
If anyone sees us can please try to send it @TheQuizzyAddict or anyone you know whoโ€™s suffering
stay alive (hi) (57826) 3 minutes ago
๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ ๐Ÿ˜ฃ
hi (57826) 5 minutes ago
also not just @TheQuizzyAddict but to every who might see this that are suffering
hi (57826) 8 minutes ago
also your not tour i canโ€™t type
lol Vired (57826) 10 minutes ago
I Meant burden burden
hi (57826) 11 minutes ago
pls get help with trusted adult I know itโ€™s tough but you will get though this I care for you person Iโ€™ve never met before. Pls live for me if no one alse Iโ€™m sorry you feel that way btw your not a verdin on everyone else You might think that but itโ€™s not true tour amazing a pice of work and thereโ€™s no way you should give up and dystroye great unique art pls tell you parents Pls and during theses tough times Know your not alone I recomendable Dr1ven i industries on YouTube I was scrolling through TikTok and I found it so yeah. Pls stay alive for me
549 days ago
Hi.... no one has commented here for a while but... idk I feel like everyone has their own problems and but I need to talk to someone about my feelings... what should i do?
647 days ago
Thank you!
650 days ago
Hope ur state gets better, Quizzy.
660 days ago
NHYT thank you!

Mentally disturbed thank you and I hope things get better for you too ๐Ÿ’–
664 days ago
hey im going through the same thing too just know ur not alone and i hope things get better for u :))))
664 days ago
Fantastic and well-written poem...
I wish you all the best for those tough things you are going through!
665 days ago
Gracie thank you! Also I hope ur anxiety gets better someday ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

Fellow Earthling I'm so sorry to hear that you've been through such tough times. I'm sure it'll get better someday ๐Ÿ’–
665 days ago
Yep my life is poo at the moment
665 days ago
I feel a bit like this too. Especially when Yaren,is being mean to me. Especially when I think about telling Alex that I like him but I get to scared. Especially when my friends ditch me for Yaren. Especially when Freya ripped up my timetable. Especially when I miss my BFFS who all go to different schools. Especially when it's the holidays and I dont see ANY of my friends. But rarely, I do find happiness.
666 days ago
This is almost exactly how it feels to have anxiety! You described this so well!!! I love it!
667 days ago
Kaity I know lol ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

And thank you!
667 days ago
Lol nobody ever reported it. But this is CRAZY AWESOME
667 days ago
Thanks Sexy Ravenclaw. Yes, I will definitely stay strong and never give up
667 days ago
Ziz is vonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stay strong and carry on!!!
668 days ago
Oh... Really? Oh thanks AddyNick!
668 days ago
This is a very good poem, Quizzy...
668 days ago
143 oh I hope you're ok then. Yes if we stay strong then we can do this ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•