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This is a short poem about winter that I made.

    When the snow falls,
    And the sky gets dark,
    You rush to your bed,
    To rest your sleepy head.

    When the adults are asleep,
    You rush downstairs to eat sweets.
    But don't tell mum and dad,
    Because they will get mad

    In the morning,
    Beware of snow warnings.
    Don't bother going to the bank,
    Cos your hot chocolate must be drank

    When the day is done,
    And the sun is gone,
    You go back to bed,
    To rest your sleepy head.

Comments (7)


527 days ago
581 days ago
hi guys! I'm going to write more poems to raise awareness of things like suicide...etc,etc
659 days ago
tysm guys. I wrote it for the school poetry competition
662 days ago
โ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธโ„๏ธThatโ€™s pretty much what my winter is like! Nice poem
664 days ago
Nice poem, Fellow Earthling!
666 days ago
Aw this is a sweet poem and it rlly does sun up everything about winter! I love it!
666 days ago
I hope you enjoy
No hate comments pls x