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A cry for help

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A poem...

    I miss the old days where I didn't cry
    Myself to sleep and the days went by
    I want to feel less insecure
    But for this anxiety there is no cure
    I'm a little scared of growing up
    Why can't these voices just shut up
    I'm afraid of what the future holds
    I'm alone and afraid and freezing cold
    This is a cry for help from me
    It's a cry for help, can't you see?

    I've always wanted to end it all
    Nobody texts me and nobody calls
    They don't even ask if I'm alright
    My friendships are really just not quite
    The same because I'm so pessimistic
    I scared of being optimistic
    I want to have a smile on my face
    But instead I just try to get out of this place
    They say that suicide won't change anything
    Well it will change what the future brings
    There will be no more tears falling down from my cheeks
    I'm too afraid and I'm too weak
    This is a cry for help, just listen to me
    It's a cry for help, can't you see?

    Nobody will care until it's too late
    The world is full of envy and hate
    Just give me some rope that will be my noose
    Don't make it too tight and don't make it too loose
    And let me jump and let me die
    I don't want anymore teardrops coming from my eyes
    One more cut and another one too
    Who will care? Tell me, who?
    This is a cry for help, a scream, a plea
    This is a cry for help, can't you see?

Comments (13)


630 days ago
Quizzy - I had no idea you were harboring all of these feelings inside. Don't do it. We're here for you and there are so many people who care. It doesn't have to be this way and there are so many people who love you โค๏ธ Quizzy you are so important and you didn't fight through it all just to stop here! Google the definition of strength and your name will be there. You can take the ocean of your tears and use it to drown out those voices because I know you can do it. We all do. We will stand behind you every step of the way and if you fall, we won't yell. We'll smile, reassure you, and help you up. Hold on, Quizzy. The light will come.
786 days ago
๐Ÿ˜” Don't do it, the temptation may be strong, but you will live through it. Fight the urge to cut, I know it's tempting. It's the only thing that lifts your head from the fog. I know! It is an awful place to be in. Don't hang yourself, don't end it all. Because some people care for you. You just have to tell the Devil to shut his lying mouth in the name of Jesus Christ! (Only works if you are saved) Look, your friends are here. They want to help! Well, that's all I have to say for now. Just stay strong.
794 days ago
This is heart breaking Quizzy. Iโ€™m here to talk to if you need anyone..โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–ค
794 days ago
What do you mean you had a dream your dad saw this poem?
823 days ago
Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’™
823 days ago
I care ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ
823 days ago
hi (57826) 1 seconds ago
If anyone sees us can please try to send it @TheQuizzyAddict or anyone you know whoโ€™s suffering
stay alive (hi) (57826) 3 minutes ago
๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ ๐Ÿ˜ฃ
hi (57826) 5 minutes ago
also not just @TheQuizzyAddict but to every who might see this that are suffering
hi (57826) 8 minutes ago
also your not tour i canโ€™t type
lol Vired (57826) 10 minutes ago
I Meant burden burden
hi (57826) 11 minutes ago
pls get help with trusted adult I know itโ€™s tough but you will get though this I care for you person Iโ€™ve never met before. Pls live for me if no one alse Iโ€™m sorry you feel that way btw your not a verdin on everyone else You might think that but itโ€™s not true tour amazing a pice of work and thereโ€™s no way you should give up and dystroye great unique art pls tell you parents Pls and during theses tough times Know your not alone I recomendable Dr1ven i industries on YouTube I was scrolling through TikTok and I found it so yeah. Pls stay alive for me
827 days ago
Nsndjxnd thank you ๐Ÿฅบ
828 days ago
This is a really good poem.
And... I care
828 days ago
I had a dream that my dad found this poem
829 days ago
Yeah that's kind of hard to do... but thanks!
829 days ago
Awwwww donโ€™t be sadddd
834 days ago
Yeah I know it's cringey