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For So Long

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A poem of many things. Or maybe only one...
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    No-one has commented for so long
    It is like a dying song!
    Don't say this is all wrong

    Days go by
    And now you have 215
    That number between
    Now and then

    When reality sweeps in
    Or doubts try to win
    Just remember
    Who you are

    There were things different
    And things that were the same
    And I looked up a name

    Months flew by
    Now there is 215
    That number between
    A great time and a lost hope

    I remember
    When it was December
    And when I stopped making sense
    And hopped that fence

    No one has been here
    For so long
    It is our dying song
    But we never went without a bang
    And though we went wrong, we always came back

    This is our dying song
    This is where we fight
    This is where we try to right the wrong

    This means a lot
    So if you have got
    A comment in you
    Please drop by and tell me why
    And what this means to you
    Or whether it is false or true

    Just anything
    Except hate
    Remember, it's not too late
    Just you wait
    Just you wait

Comments (5)


417 days ago
Thanks JayfeatherBB and Ravenclaw!
JayfeatherBB, if you press on the "More from AddyNick" button and look through a few pages (or just go to the poetry section of fanfiction lol) then you will see I have written MANY poems! And I probably will make more :D
419 days ago
I like it!! You should make more.
419 days ago
Very nice!
423 days ago
Thank you!
does it mean a lot, or does it not...
423 days ago