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Give Me Some Time

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To explain my odd, well, different, hope--in poetry form.

What I Want To Do

Can't I just walk across the floor
Open the door and let the floodgates out
Sometimes I want to scream, to shout
Other times, it is only whispers of what could be
So I want to go boldly into the room and tell them what I see
I think it's amazing
I know it's so hard
But I have been thinking
And I think this is what I want to do
And I want to tell them, or someone
'Sometimes I wonder if God would rather me
Do something else, or be
Something other
But this is who I want to be
What I want to do'
Though I know
I never could tell you
I want to say
'This is what I want to do'
And I'm wanting to do that
Is there another way?
Of course there is
Roundabout instead of direct
I suppose I could
But how would
I ever find the strength
This is the length
I want to cross
This is what I want to do
What I want to do

Comments (4)


96 days ago
Thank you @143
101 days ago
This is beautiful...I love your writing style
119 days ago
Thank you Maddy! I will check them out :)
120 days ago
Hi this is beautiful from one writer to another. I made some poetry too you can check it out here I'd love you too give me advice if it's good or bad thanks