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Goodbye - a poem

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I'm not good at writing but I hope you read my poem. It's about how I'm feeling right now. Please comment.

    One jump, one trigger, one cut
    Sickening feeling in gut

    No going back to square one
    Once you are done, you are done

    Keeping it all to yourself
    Goodbye note on the bookshelf

    Poems about suicide
    Everyone set them aside

    Tried to make it obvious
    It made you notorious

    They care when it is too late
    When you start to suffocate

    You want the pain to be gone
    You want someone to lean on

    The world never seems to stop
    Your body begins to drop

    Goodbye, my life is over
    Forget me, I'm a loner

Comments (3)


458 days ago
I hope you feel better. Every life is worth it, including yours. 👍 🤞
576 days ago
i think he got stuffed in an anamatronic.
625 days ago
Like you're talking about suicide? Oh my gosh