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Paths

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This is a poem I made hope you like it!

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    Paths
    One day we were on the same way
    Until the tide changed
    I lied, I cried after you moved away
    Why can’t it stay the same
    Why does this have to be lame
    Why did you move away?
    Why
    Why
    Why
    I can’t do it
    I can't stay
    Until you don’t move away
    Please don’t leave
    Please don’t cheat
    Please come back
    Don’t move away


    I miss you
    I always will
    Please don’t leave
    Please don’t stay


    If it’s meant to be
    Our paths will cross the same way
    After you left a new one came away
    It’s been hard
    It’s been

    Hard
    Hard
    Hard

    Please come back

Comments (11)

autorenew

38 days ago
Golden. you are so, so good at this. and everything should turn out in the end
373 days ago
Yeah I know lol but I like singing better!
373 days ago
Thanks for the advice maddy! I’m sad to learn that your not in the poems at much! It was so great reading all your poems!
374 days ago
It's okay jas :) your great at poems! My advice is only put things that actually mean something to you if they do not just because they ryme but your great! I'm not really into poems anymore to be honest tho
374 days ago
Yeah sorry maddy I’m not that good at poems
377 days ago
I felt like some of the lines you just wanted to ryme like when you said "why does this have to be lame" idk it's just how I feel
385 days ago
Yes only bc spicy forced me but I am not going to be on as much
385 days ago
Thanks pinky! So have you decided to stay??
386 days ago
OMG That’s amazing jasmine 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
386 days ago
Thanks wild 😛.
386 days ago
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍