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It will never be the same

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Just a poem that really means a lot to me about something that happened with my dad.

    Life can drop in a second
    No matter who you are
    I found that out the hard way
    Ever since all I can do it cry
    All day I try to say how I feel
    When I go to bed
    I sit
    I cry

    The day she told me
    I was a wreck
    Just about a week
    Until the next

    You never realize how much you love someone until there life is at stake

    The lungs
    Be careful with them
    Please don’t smoke 🚭
    Always think about how your decisions affect other people

    Years ago
    Had a bad day
    He got a cigarette
    Kept going
    Kept doing it
    It’s over
    Because of that one bad choice

    In 2-3 years
    It will be over
    He won’t be able to have a cigarette
    Because he will be in his grave

    Sorry if this sounds dark
    But it’s the truth
    Only one
    Only that
    Why him
    Why me
    How could he be so stupid
    One bad choice can ruin your life

Comments (5)


92 days ago
Thanks guys sorry didn’t see this till now plus my numbers different, IK it’s bc I am not using my house WiFi anymore for this since I don’t wanna get caught on here! Thanks guys I just I don’t want anything to happen and it’s not right what he does. He drinks and so does my mom but she doesn’t smoke and he does. Tbh I always say I hate him to myself. He is always nice and then he will yell at me and I’ll cry. I feel babyish but it’s fine.
93 days ago
So sorry Jasmin
94 days ago
ITS AN AMAZING POEM !!! Very relatable , touching , heart warming and expressive ! dont feel bad or sad !! my dad smokes and drinks , but what can we do about his freedom of choice ?? i'll pray for your dad and your family and you 'hugs you'
94 days ago
96 days ago
Sorry I know it’s not a good poem it’s just about my dad something that he found out when he went to the doctor. Thanks for reading if you did