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I miss you- Poem

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A poem about my past self.

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    I miss you
    The way you smiled
    and laughed as you walked down the hall
    You didn't care what anybody thought
    No, you didn't give a damn at all.
    I miss you
    The way you walked
    and even that voice of yours
    Yes, I miss the way you talked
    I miss you
    singing along to your favorite song
    without feeling insecure
    looking in the mirror
    and liking what you see
    I miss you
    that skinny little girl
    who sometimes cried and yelled
    but still, you kept a smile
    I miss you
    would you please come back?
    because I'm tired and distressed
    I want back that smile
    and the reflection I took pride in
    Why did you leave?

Comments (17)

autorenew

439 days ago
@rockpoison

I-I'm sowwy
439 days ago
w h y a r e y o u s o g o o d a t

m a k i n g m e c r y
450 days ago
Thanksssssssss
453 days ago
You are so good at poetry, I really like this one ❤️
472 days ago
Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much that means to me! I don't usually share my poems, and I love that people can feel this way about them!

Wish you all the best
474 days ago
this makes me so emotional... and yes Star-Chan I may be addicted to your work now.. it’s absolutely beautiful
484 days ago
@Pink

Thank you so much! :D
485 days ago
This poem really hit the spot in my heart. You did a wonderful job at this! :D
485 days ago
Thanks Ari-chan!
Thanks everyone! ^^
485 days ago
Wow, this poem was so deep! I loved it! TwT
485 days ago
This is beautiful, I love it.
485 days ago
You didn't have to be so rude, Mimi.
486 days ago
its very relatable to me. i really like it.
486 days ago
I love it, it's awesome!!!
486 days ago
Mimi actually it’s an awesome poem. It shows how real change is, even in a person, and how it can hurt.
486 days ago
they left cause they hate u
486 days ago
worst poem ever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!