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My Voice

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    My voice
    maybe it's not loud enough
    for them to hear
    when I tell them,
    "Please stop, you're hurting my feelings!"

    My voice
    maybe it's too quiet
    for them to listen to
    when I say,
    "Please don't hit me anymore, it hurts!"

    My voice
    maybe it's not bold enough
    for them to want to understand me
    when I scream,
    "I need someone to help me, but I don't know how to ask!"

    My voice
    maybe it's not clear enough
    for them to make out my words
    when I whisper,
    "I've had enough pain and I want out."

    My voice
    it's actually plenty loud and bold and clear
    the problem is I didn't say these things at all
    I'm too scared
    and so they stay as thoughts.

Comments (8)


198 days ago
Thanks!! Y'all are too nice, haha
201 days ago
This was great, and parts remind me of me. ❤️ That’s good poetry
211 days ago
It’s pretty good!
220 days ago
Aw, I hate to hear that you also have these issues! I hope things get better for you
221 days ago
I think we have the same parents, same emotions, except I don't express in poetry, I just write.
222 days ago

Aw thanks so much!
223 days ago
Excellent poetry. I wish you strength to use your voice. I wish you safety and love. My love to you 💚
233 days ago

big sad

sad sad