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Good People

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My best friend's mom died today.

(Well, presumably so...She messaged me "My mom died today" and I have not heard from her since)

And I wrote a poem about it...

-Star, 4-27-21

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    I wanna know why God takes good people
    Why do they have to die?
    I know I shouldn't cry
    But it hurts me inside

    I didn't know her that well
    But I always kind of thought she wise
    I used to look at her and wish that I could be that nice
    I liked her a lot, she was happy, she was bright

    If she's really gone
    and we're using the word "was"
    then I just wanna say
    I hope she's still happy where she is

Comments (9)

autorenew

218 days ago
Hey sorry if this is inappropriate considering the circumstances (sorry again if it is) but I saw your comments on my poems and just wanted to let you know I appreciate your love and support ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’ž keep writing poems!
Love,
Maddy
261 days ago
@Ari-Chan

Of course. I'm really sorry and I hope you're holding up alright

@Ana Sonrie

I'm not entirely sure, I have little contact with Ari as my parents...well... It;'s complicated
262 days ago
I canโ€™t imagine :( Do you know how your friend is doing?
265 days ago
Thanks Star, this is a beautiful poem
265 days ago
@Troller

Thank you. I'll move on
266 days ago
Sorry for your loss thats sad :(
267 days ago
I'm more worried for my friend though
267 days ago
@Sofie

Thank you.
267 days ago
I'm sorry for your loss