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Broken-hearted People

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This is a poem about mental illness but feel free to interpret it however you like. It's a bit of a weird poem but I believe poetry does not have any rules or limits!

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    Wistful winds wander around
    Grieving grass make no sound
    Broken buckets kicking away
    Tearful time, a tragic display

    Broken-hearted people, broken-hearted lands
    Every word is lethal, no one understands 

    Doleful, diseased victims gather
    Brainless bats continue to blather
    Forlorn figures fake a smile
    Crestfallen creases stay a while

    Broken-hearted people, broken-hearted lands
    Every word is lethal, no one understands

    Shamefully shunning our words
    Twisted torture comes in herds
    Serene silence focuses now
    Harmonious hush, my final bow

    Broken-hearted people, broken-hearted lands
    Every word is lethal, no one understands

Comments (4)

autorenew

302 days ago
you are amazing at this. keep it up
327 days ago
Beautiful. 💚 I love the musicality of the words you used 💚
327 days ago
I found this poem under the "Poems" category. I would SO rate it 5/5! It was raw, honest, and emotional, everything a poem should be.
keep on writing poems CrazyMadison❤❤❤❤
349 days ago
How did you find the poem? Any kind and constructive feedback is appreciated!!