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Lionclan- The dawn of new power- The Power Begins

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In the mysterious LionClan, a young cat finds an ordinary necklace. Or so she thought. Join Fadefur(ME), her brothers Dark Secrets, Light Shadows, her sister Cheetah Wind, and her cousin Blade in the quest to uncover their TRUE powers. Before LionClan is lost. Forever.

Fadekit streched. In a few days, she would be an apprentice. Her brother, Dark Secrets, yawned. " Can you believe we'll be apprentices soon!" said Fadekit's little sister, Cheetah Wind. " We won't BE apprentices if we're late to the ceremony!" said Fadekit's other brother, Light Shadows. He was right; they HAD to start waking up sooner!

Comments (7)


712 days ago
Just change the necklace to a collar
875 days ago
Could be better way better
908 days ago
Longer please.But otherwise good!😊Also can you make one of my oc’s?Snowfall is a calico she-cat with green eyes!
959 days ago
Have to add to my other comment. How would they know if it was like. Hmmmm 10 THOUSAND YEARS BEFORE TWOLEGS! Sorry about that
1009 days ago
They are right. Not trying to be mean though you should put more thought in to this
1059 days ago
nice i liked it. but kits name always ends in kit and apprenticice name always ends in paw
1082 days ago
No offence, cats can’t wear necklaces, they wouldn’t know what a necklace was, and it’s short and a little boring. But ok.