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Warrior Cats Fanfic: Loner`s Quest (Part 1)

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HI! THIS IS MY FIRST EVER FANFIC AND IT IS MY BEST EFFORT! I HOPE TO PRODUCE EVEN BETTER FANFICTION IN THE FUTURE! UNTIL THEN, PLEASE ENJOY THIS!

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The loner stalked through the tall grass. She was downwind of the rabbit. Her ears pricked, she charged straight at it and chased it over a ridge. The rabbit darted into a clump of heather. She caught it, then stopped to look around. She was on Clan territory!

Comments (8)

autorenew

689 days ago
Please write more chapters it has a ton of detail
920 days ago
This is good writing but definitely write more for each chapter, or do a lot more chapters. Overall there was about 12 sentences in the whole thing, 4 in each chapter. I would have liked it even more than I do now if it was longer . Otherwise amazing AMAZING Amazing Job! Clap from me
934 days ago
You are going to have too write some more.
968 days ago
Is that true, Philip P. Huberton? Because I find it hard to believe.
995 days ago
Write more pls! It is amazing
1160 days ago
Write more! Write more!
1591 days ago
As a PhD professor from Yale I believe your story is incredible and I'm patiently awaiting more!
2014 days ago
The chapters need to be a lot longer. I recomend you make like fifty chapters if their going to be that short. But it's really good otherwise.