Warrior Cats- TRUST AND REGRET

As Cottonfire paced around the nursery, she heard a huge caterwauling. She raced into the den and to her pleasure found Feathershine standing over a beautiful cream she cat with three kits at her belly. "Oh Rosetail they're wonderful!" meowed Cottonfire. Apparently Rosetail saw the longing in her eyes. "It will be your turn soon enough now. " she stated with a glance at Brakenfall. " You two seem to be getting closer!"
"Yes, we are. But I don't need a mate right now. I have my Clan to look after. Who's going to be deputy when I'm in the nursery caring for kits? My Clan needs me. Not Brakenfall." And with that Cottonfire padded out of the nursery to see how the camp was getting on. All looked well, so she decided to go tell Stormeye about his kits and to see how Daypaws training was going. She walked out of camp to the Training Clearing. She found Stormeye showing Daypaw a fighting move. "Ok. Now it's your turn." Meowed Stormeye. Daypaw raced forward and leaped and twisted onto Stormyes back and jumped off just in time to rake his belly with her paws before he turned on her. " Nice job! " Cottonfire pointed out. " You're going to be a real fighter!" Daypaw whirled around to give Cottonfire a pleased look, before Cottonfire gave Stormeye the news. Just as she opened her mouth, she heard yelling from Grasstail. He had been on the dawn patrol and was now racing towards them. " Help! We're being attacked by foxes!"

Comments (56)

MothSTAR (Hawkheart) (34135)

10 days ago

If we're correcting errors it's spelled "Feeling", not "Fealing." Thanks!

Shinekit (66643)

23 days ago

That was kind of sad and was pretty short and didn’t really have as much expression as I would have liked, personally, but overall it was pretty good.

The cat is the way (14531)

39 days ago

Fealing not dealing

I... This was so good I'm crying rn... 😢🙂😢😢 why did dayflight die..? Oof this is so powerful u really know how to put the dealing in ur writing good job 🙂😢🙂

BlackSTAR (99738)

63 days ago

Oh no poor Brakenfall!

NICE WRITING. I love your Warrior names:)

Hanah Stokes (64262)

88 days ago

thank u everyone for saying nice things about it
i have tons of writing ideas but i can never see to write them

omggggggggggggggggg (92737)

98 days ago

oomggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

Rain Perch (58146)

105 days ago

More PLS! Ignore all the comments saying “I DONT LIKE THE SAD ENDING ITSHORRIBLE UGH” AND WRITE MORE! People like you have a talent. For writing. Some people just making people Feel bad. Pls ignore them! You write amazing girl! Use your talents! 😉

CINDERWHISKER lol (68998)

164 days ago

LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR get my point??????????????????????????

Silverfeather (97038)

232 days ago

i have to know MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oakfoot (50081)

267 days ago

MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEE

Coalwhisker (07101)

268 days ago

Wow that is amazing! PLEASE more I have to know.

Emily MacCowan (50081)

292 days ago

That’s so good! Please make another!

Hanah Stokes (14582)

301 days ago

sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!i am writing a sequel to it

Flagpost (98270)

308 days ago

I NEED ANOTHER STORY BUT REALLY WHY DOES SWEET INOCENT BRAKENFALL DIE

CherryCloud (02313)

309 days ago

OMG so awesome please make it longer, but WHY TWO MATES

Peach poppy (02313)

Great story I loved it, I just recommend that is longer. >;3

316 days ago

well i might be working on the second book if i have time Nightleaf

really jayfeather? which ones were yours?

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