5 Chapter - 2.149 Words - Developed by: Hanah Stokes - Developed on: - 4,875 taken- The story is completed - 13 people like it
Hello! I have always wanted to write a warrior cat fiction story, and I have already made up five clans, and a new name for star clan. So this is my first attempt at it and I hope you like the story!
If we're correcting errors it's spelled "Feeling", not "Fealing." Thanks!
Shinekit(66643)
23 days ago
That was kind of sad and was pretty short and didn’t really have as much expression as I would have liked, personally, but overall it was pretty good.
The cat is the way(14531)
39 days ago
Fealing not dealing
The cat is the way(14531)
39 days ago
I... This was so good I'm crying rn... 😢🙂😢😢 why did dayflight die..? Oof this is so powerful u really know how to put the dealing in ur writing good job 🙂😢🙂
BlackSTAR(99738)
63 days ago
Oh no poor Brakenfall!
BlackSTAR(99738)
63 days ago
NICE WRITING. I love your Warrior names:)
Hanah Stokes(64262)
88 days ago
thank u everyone for saying nice things about it i have tons of writing ideas but i can never see to write them
More PLS! Ignore all the comments saying “I DONT LIKE THE SAD ENDING ITSHORRIBLE UGH” AND WRITE MORE! People like you have a talent. For writing. Some people just making people Feel bad. Pls ignore them! You write amazing girl! Use your talents! 😉
CINDERWHISKER lol(68998)
164 days ago
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR get my point??????????????????????????
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i have tons of writing ideas but i can never see to write them
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