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Sagehearts decision

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Really really bad but now I know that it will not hang me from the torture of WIP! by making a different fan fic and new chapter.

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"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting" called Sheepstar. Sagekit bounced and rolled underneath the Highrock, but Nightkit walked under the rock slowly. "Sagekit, you will be known as Sagepaw. And your mentor shall be Fernpelt." Sagepaw padded over to Fernpelt and they touched noses. "Nightkit, you will be known as Nightpaw. You mentor will be Whitefoot. I hope you will pass down all Darktail taught you to Nightpaw." Whitefoot had a surprised look on her face, then they touched noses. "Nightpaw! Nightpaw! Sagepaw! Sagepaw paw!" The chants rose in the crowd. "I wanna learn how to hunt!" Meowed Sagepaw. "I wanna learn to fight!" Yowled Nightpaw. "Okay, let's go." Whitefoot meowed.

"And then pounce on me. Got it?" Meowed Whitefoot. Whitefoot pounced. Nightpaw didn't move. Whitefoot landed on him, "Great StarClan! I'm sorry!" There was no response. "Is h-he d-dead?" Stammered Sagepaw. "No. He's breathing. We have to get the medicine cat!" Yowled Whitefoot.

Comments (39)

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418 days ago
Needs a bit more other that that it is great
598 days ago
hey i need to tell you something.. Im a girl and... Im in love with mu Cuz and its a Girl! GuEsS iM gAy!
598 days ago
How about this for a backstory.. When ShadowHeart was a kitten, Her parents did not care about her... They did not feed her or Take care of her! she had a Sister, her name has Brightpaw, she was loved! But shadow was not loved.. So one night Shadow ranaway! She
wonder and wonder, But no hope! The next day Shadows parents did not care! that she ranaway, but Brightpaw did! Shadow was thinking.. My parents don't love me i should just Go die.. So shadow was on the Road waiting for a Car to hit her. Then BrightPaw was wondering
In till she seen Shadow! she have Bite her tail in Order to save her! shadow said.. Why did you save me? BrightPaw said.. Bc i love You! After that happen, BrightPaw ranaway with Shadow! later they seen a lot of Cats and wanted to join them. So the cats let them join!
So as they grew Older, they fighted! There parents still don't know were there at.. But there parents said.. I will find you Cats and if i do you'll have a FIGHT.. the end (wat ya think?!)
598 days ago
shadowheart.. Try thinking of a backstory that goes with the Name!
598 days ago
Yassssssssss u cannnnnnnnn!!!! :3
598 days ago
SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo Can i help Ya with the backstory?? -3-
598 days ago
tHaNk YoU uWu OkIe OwO
598 days ago
And I love the backstory!! Shadowheart doesn't have a backstory yet though ;-; and I have a backstory for Whitefoot but it's old and its trash
598 days ago
Allthetests Is not strict at all, only with the tests and if you put something inappropriate in a comment, it will do this: 💗
598 days ago
I never been blocked before :p
598 days ago
if i was blocked.. i was blocked on wikihow just 1 time and they forgive meh!
598 days ago
This is the backstory of StarNight.. When StarNight was a Kitten, Her mom got hit by a Car.
StarNight Pass out when she seen that, Then she woke up. she wonder places looking for food, Then she was in a place full of "CaTs" she was Dare to Fight! So she did, she won the fight for a Lil cute Kitten. as she grew Up, she had to fight ALOT! and i mean ALOT, to this Day she fights.. But one time she Got a Bad injury! she was half Blind! But that did not stop her from fighting, the other cats think shes the best at fighting! But.. one day 2 new cats come, she
knew her 2 sisters.. LunaPaw, and Darklight.. they looked just like them... Thats the end of the backstory.. Or is it.. YoU lIkE iT?? UwU
598 days ago
And you should try to make a test!
598 days ago
How would you react if we got Blocked? D:
598 days ago
Thanks! Me too! I just want the red too be lilac purple!
598 days ago
i like the talk page!
598 days ago
I like your Oc names! Mine are Whitefoot and Shadowheart!
598 days ago
OoOoOoOoOo NiCe UwU
598 days ago
Oh and I just got my talk page decorated!! :D
598 days ago
I have 3 ocs there.. DarkLight, lunapaw, And StarNight.. :3